IDEAS IN CONTEXT / Poster Review / Term 4, Week 6

We reviewed our PSA posters in the class this week, by writing down what stands out from the poster, what doesn’t work and how we’d approach the topic should we be working on it.

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Mid Term Peer Review Download

My feedback were mostly on how it lacks body copy (too tiny down there I guess) and it needs the body copy for the posters to be understood better. The visuals and concept are well received, subtly controversial (as controversial as a school project and my brain can get, anyways). The typeface also needs improvement, so I’ll be working on that.

27/11/2016

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Enlarged the body copy and made the “Shame No Body” into organisation logo. Changed the typeface of the headline as well.

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Adjusted leading
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